Writing Across Berkeley

Preface to the Writing Guide for Sociology, 2nd Edition

November 30, 2011

I blame it on IQ tests. Many undergraduates arrive at Berkeley with the idea that writers, like geniuses, are born rather than made. They imagine that my colleagues and I simply sit down and write books and articles in pretty much finished form, spending little time on drafts or any hours at all on editing and reformulating. A lot of undergraduates despair because they think that if they were not born writers, they are condemned never to be very good at it.

Yet, as you will learn here, the genius model of writing is wrong. Just as psychologists have discovered that many differences...

We Need All Kinds of Us at a University

September 20, 2013

Oh, god, I’m going to quote Mr. Spock, from the episode “Is There in Truth No Beauty?”

Dr. Miranda Jones: The glory of creation is in its infinite diversity.

Spock: And the way our differences combine to create meaning and beauty.

How “Big Bang Theory” is that? Yet my purpose is not to appear to be a big ol’ nerd; rather, I’d like to take this exchange as a comment on what teaching should look like at a large research university.

A recent study of students at Northwestern, published by the National Bureau of Economic Research has brought to the fore, again, an...

Stories Students Tell

January 17, 2018

Storytelling has long been part of the academic world.

The anthropologist narrates a cockfight in Bali. The economist tells the story of Google buses in San Francisco. The sociologist follows an immigrant Southeast Asian family en route to rural Mississippi.

Stories form the basis for the understanding of another culture, or for the analysis of local economic or social change as told by an expert.

But...

Argumentative Alchemy: Writing to Persuade an Opposition Audience

January 1, 2002

How do we transform leaden argument into golden insight?

We’ve all had the experience of sharpening our ideas and deepening our knowledge as we attempt to convince a colleague whose opinion differs from our own. In like manner, our students can sharpen their ideas and deepen their knowledge by writing papers to persuade an opposition audience.

To successfully persuade such an audience, students must consider more than their own sometimes-hazy opinion:

They must truly view the issue from the audience’s point of view and understand not only the logical, but also the...

Teaching Argument Through Debate

January 1, 2002

Although argument is a fundamental part of academic work, many students shy away from what they see as an overly combative writing style. But college-level argumentation actually requires much more subtle skills than just giving a yes-no answer: it requires that students discuss weaknesses as well as strengths, use counterargument, and make concessions. How can we help students gain confidence with this sort of writing?

In-class debate forces students to take a clear stand on an issue, and also to engage directly with other perspectives. In-class role playing can help students gain...

Writing with a Living Outline

August 6, 2019

“Strong outlines make strong essays.” The axiom might be attributed to any number of writing instructors or well-intentioned composition guidebooks. Indeed, student writers from a young age often learn that outlines are an essential part of the writing process. But what makes an outline strong? What should the outlining process look like, and what should it do for the writer? Perhaps because the outline is generally held to be a writer’s private document, or because the outlining process seems so obvious sometimes that the craft itself becomes easy to overlook, these questions often slip...

Developing Thoughts; Organizing Writing

October 11, 2019

Writing primers or writing instruction may offer advice about how to create coherence in essays by identifying the key transitions used to indicate relationships: adding; comparing and contrasting; creating emphases; identifying cause and effect or conditions.

It is an important first step: describing what transitions are and then demonstrating how they are used by giving examples.

But this approach requires supplemental learning or instruction: identifying what transitions to use and what relationships matter in the first place means creating “distinctions” as part of a...

Saying "Yes" When Students Ask "Can I ..."

November 30, 2012

I teach a variety of writing classes at UC Berkeley–-two that fulfill the University’s Reading and Composition Requirement, an intermediate and an advanced writing class. The intermediate class–-CW 105: Finding Your Voice with Others–-is one in which students read current articles–-academic and journalism–-as well as a little theory–-Marshall McLuhan, Walter Ong, David Post, Lawrence Lessig, Sherry Turkle, Anne Wysocki, etc.-–about new media and technology. Multimodal forms of expression are required, and students write reflective journals with each project submitted, thinking about how...

Making the Most of Your Introduction

February 28, 2020

In academic writing, we tend to put a lot of emphasis on the thesis statement, or core argument, of an essay. When assessing the thesis statement, instructors—among others—might wonder “so what?” In other words, they wonder why the thesis is significant or meaningful. Traditionally, thesis work is focused on what comes next: the body of the essay. Author Karen Gocsik suggests that a thesis needs to be an "umbrella idea," an idea “big enough that all of [the...

A New Kind of English Major: Editing, Writing and Media at Florida State University

October 14, 2019

Editing, Writing, and Media (EWM) is currently one of the three undergraduate majors offered by the English Department at Florida State University (FSU). Launched in 2010, EWM is the newest and largest of the majors, which include literature (recently re-branded Literature, Media, and Culture) and Creative Writing. FSU is a selective state institution (55,000 applications for a freshman class of 6,400) with most students seeing higher education as a pathway to professional employment. The idea of a liberal arts education remains at the core of the general education curriculum, though it’s...